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| Stefan (16/04/2008)
Bert Trautmanns neck brace (16/04/2008)
What happened to Ryan and even I remember Fairport Convention
Him and Freddie left the group after they got there letters,they weren't serious about it
I'm available if you want me?
Are there ramps though?
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 19:00:48 | |
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| | Song I Wrote During My Hour Detention Today Stunning Light
Waited for her, I would have lasted forever,
Except she left too fast,
Wondered how, as the sky grew dark with advancing clouds,
That sight would be my last,
Stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
Never thought, the harshness of the lesson taught,
Would hurt like this,
Blatant scar, from ancient times and my guitar,
Without you I reminisce,
Of stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
It's as if something so beautiful was not meant to be,
Had by any man alive and especially not me,
Every time I wake to tears of lasting regret,
I will always lay and remember,
Stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
So long,
So long,
Stefan Allasandro Ellis Isac |
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 19:09:46 | |
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| Stefan (17/04/2008)
Song I Wrote During My Hour Detention Today Stunning Light
Waited for her, I would have lasted forever,
Except she left too fast,
Wondered how, as the sky grew dark with advancing clouds,
That sight would be my last,
Stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
Never thought, the harshness of the lesson taught,
Would hurt like this,
Blatant scar, from ancient times and my guitar,
Without you I reminisce,
Of stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
It's as if something so beautiful was not meant to be,
Had by any man alive and especially not me,
Every time I wake to tears of lasting regret,
I will always lay and remember,
Stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
So long,
So long,
u will probably win the competition and then fame will corrupt u. and then Rio Ferdinand will appear in ur video clip.
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 19:19:52 | |
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| Stefan (17/04/2008)
Song I Wrote During My Hour Detention Today
Stunning Light
Waited for her, I would have lasted forever,
Except she left too fast,
Wondered how, as the sky grew dark with advancing clouds,
That sight would be my last,
Stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
Never thought, the harshness of the lesson taught,
Would hurt like this,
Blatant scar, from ancient times and my guitar,
Without you I reminisce,
Of stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
It's as if something so beautiful was not meant to be,
Had by any man alive and especially not me,
Every time I wake to tears of lasting regret,
I will always lay and remember,
Stunning light, she's exactly like a lightning strike,
Directly to my forehead,
Knocked me down, left burnt and broken on my front lawn,
And as fast as she appeared she's gone,
So long,
So long,
So long,
Avoid, rather than check. Check, rather than hurt. Hurt, rather than maim. Maim, rather than kill. For all life is precious, nor can any be replaced. |
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 19:45:30 | |
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| | To be fair Stefan, that's not too bad. I'd be more interested to hear it as a song as it is hard to imagine. It reads more as a poem. This is a serious question, not having a go, but do you write about other stuff, not girls and love? Just because it might be very "believable" to hear love songs coming from a 14 year old. Kind of like Jojo. It's so wrong that she was fit. She was 13.
From Manchester with love |
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 19:49:55 | |
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| | Good writing skills. Not being musical I cannot visualise it a a song. Why were you in Detention? You were grounded the other day and do you travel from Sheffield to MGS everyday?
you do not mess with Jack Reacher |
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 19:58:37 | |
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| Squidge (17/04/2008)
To be fair Stefan, that's not too bad. I'd be more interested to hear it as a song as it is hard to imagine. It reads more as a poem.
This is a serious question, not having a go, but do you write about other stuff, not girls and love? Just because it might be very"believable" to hear love songs coming from a 14 year old. Kind of like Jojo. It's so wrong that she was fit. She was 13.
Squidge mate, things have moved on since your day fella.
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 20:08:11 | |
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| Bert Trautmanns neck brace (17/04/2008)
Good writing skills. Not being musical I cannot visualise it a a song.
Why were you in Detention?
You were grounded the other day and do you travel from Sheffield to MGS everyday?
Nice probage Bertram.
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| | | Posted 17/04/2008 22:41:38 | |
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| One is practiced in the art Benjamino
you do not mess with Jack Reacher |
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